Where White Foxgloves .....
I had seen the bright
auburn coat of the fox
lit by an opalescent moon
and the wild grass quiver.
I had seen white foxgloves
mark as pebbles of pearl
the lie of the lair
in the glare of the mid day sun.
I had seen, for a brief moment,
the jay soar to roost
in early evening, and gasped
at the marvel of sunset plumage.
Colour was the clue, so clear,
so periwinkle blue,
amidst a puff of down,
with sharp black bar lines
marking the plummet of the jay
where white foxgloves grow.
AS
11 comments:
I love the words 'periwinkle blue'. Did you write this poem? It's beautiful.
the world sings its song in colour! thankyou for sharing your lovely writing aguja. steven
"I had seen white foxgloves
mark as pebbles of pearl
the lie of the lair
in the glare of the mid day sun."
That is my favorite part. Lovely.
What a beautiful poem. Your phrasing is so melodic I can almost hear music when I read it.
Thank you for sharing
Oh colours shine and dive here, Aguja... Lovely poem so deep and colourful, yet... foxgloves...
Beautiful prose. xo style, she wrote
Gorgeous. I love this.
Through your colorful word imagery the scene of a struggle between white fox and jay becomes crystal clear.
Thank you all for such encouraging comments ... and yes, Spangle, it is one of my poems.
Will be catching up on all your postings this week. Last week was quite hectic.
This is a beautiful poem. It's full of emotional nuances.
Thank you Olga. I am so glad that you have enjoyed reading this poem.
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